TOPIC：環(huán)境保護(hù)；城市環(huán)境
場(chǎng)景：霧霾；空氣污染
Beijing’s smoghas mostly behaved itself during the Olympics, but it will remain a feature ofthe city’s landscape for the foreseeable future. How bad is it really? What arethe economic and humaneffects?
總的來說，北京的霧霾在奧運(yùn)會(huì)期間的表現(xiàn)還算乖，但在可預(yù)見的將來，它還會(huì)成為這座城市的景物特色之一。霧霾之災(zāi)究竟何等嚴(yán)重？它對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)與人有何影響？必克英語外教一對(duì)一英語寫作課堂免費(fèi)申請(qǐng)>>>

【經(jīng)典句式】
smog霧霾
economicand human effects 對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)與人的影響
【犀利觀點(diǎn)】當(dāng)你實(shí)在想不出開頭、又快要沒有時(shí)間的時(shí)候，不妨這樣用問句開頭。
A group of Edinburgh medical students dugup the facts on the Great London Smog of 1952 (the photos are fascinating; areal shock for people who think environmental problems are something new). Thestudents provided numbers on the level of air pollution in London 1952 and Ihave compared these to recent numbers for Beijing.
幾位愛丁堡大學(xué)醫(yī)學(xué)院的學(xué)生發(fā)掘了1952年倫敦大霧霾的一些事實(shí)（其中的照片引人入勝；這對(duì)于那些認(rèn)為環(huán)境問題歷史甚短的人無疑是當(dāng)頭棒喝）。這些學(xué)生提供了1952年倫敦空氣污染水平的一批數(shù)字，我把它們與北京的最近數(shù)字做了比較。
Beijing’s poor airquality – 300 or somicrograms of particulate matter per cubic metre – has generated volumesof purple prose, but London’s numbers in the 1950s were consistently above 400, and surged to 1,600 during theGreat Smog – more than five times Beijing’s inearly August.
北京上空每立方米空氣約含300微克粉塵物質(zhì)，這一惡劣的空氣質(zhì)量已經(jīng)讓人寫出了許多華麗的抱怨文章，但倫敦在1950年代的這一數(shù)字持續(xù)超過400，并在大霧霾期間狂漲到1600，這是北京八月初數(shù)字的5倍以上。
【經(jīng)典句式】
poorair quality 惡劣的空氣質(zhì)量
particulatematter 粉塵物質(zhì)
300or so micrograms of particulate matter per cubic metre 每立方米空氣約含300微克粉塵物質(zhì)
consistent持續(xù)的
【小作文數(shù)據(jù)表達(dá)】
consistently above 400持續(xù)超過400
surge to … during … 在……期間飆升至……
more than five times … 是……的五倍以上
【犀利觀點(diǎn)】環(huán)境保護(hù)例證：北京+倫敦
The steady drumbeat of daily deaths in London surged along with thesmog, climbing from 250 a day to 900; overall the Great Smog isestimated as having caused at least 4,000 extra deaths.
隨著霧霾，倫敦每日罹難人數(shù)驚心動(dòng)魄地飆升，從每日250人飆升至900人，據(jù)估計(jì)，整個(gè)大霧霾期間至少令4000人死于非命。
【小作文數(shù)據(jù)表達(dá)】
Death （可數(shù)）死亡人數(shù)
climb from … to …從……飆升至……
overall …is estimated as …據(jù)估計(jì)，整體而言……
【犀利觀點(diǎn)】環(huán)境保護(hù)例證：北京+倫敦
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